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Umbrella remake

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This is a digital remake of this one: beautylove17.deviantart.com/ar…
:icontinetheeviltwin: gave me the idea to remake it digitally (actually she said in black/white but I can always turn it into grayscale later)

It's almost two years since I drawed the original, have I come far??

(and if you wonder.. the drawing is NOT inspiretted by Rihannas song Umbrella..!)
Character and art (c) :iconbeautylove17:
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to the super long comment! :D 
now.. first of... thank you for making it! :D knew it would be awesome! :D and you should totally make it grey scale as well! :D 

you have come really far! :D (lets start from the top of the picture ;) (i will take Sabi last :P)) 

your umbrella is really good! :D its a little offbeat compared to the rod... though i think that it has improved! :D the way you have knocked the umbrella to the tree seems more real :D i miss the dripping from the umbrella... think you need to make maybe a few drops? but i love the colors! :D they are so good and work perfectly with the drawing! :D love the handle ^^

your tree is really good! :D i miss that its maybe a little thicker (like the old one ^^) and then maybe some roots? 
if you look at a real tree, only the really thin is shown without roots (there is thick tree too but not as common... :D

your rain is so awesome!!! :D you need to teach me how to do it >.< 
also your background is amazing! :D you dark sky is magical! i think the grass could be maybe a little darker closest on the sky ^^ 

and now! for Sabi ^^
she look so wonderful! you can feel her sadness! you can just feel how the rain reflects her feelings of grief and hopelessness (mostly the last) 
i think, compared to the body, the neck is a little too 'big' ^^ i know that she has a really fluffy neck ;) but feel like it too much, especially when you look at the head :D 
i feel like you shading is just perfect! :D i know you want it to be more fur-like shading.. but i think that this is a part of the stye ^^ it would still be really awesome with the other shading ^^ (yes i am also responding on your journal :P) if you want if more fur-like you should just practice! :D 

all in all.... a wonderful and storytelling piece! so many feelings! :D 

okay... i think i got everything i wanted to say ^^ 
peace out!  :D